Once again, our group turned to Google Docs to record a contribution of our respective ideas. Screenshots are posted below.
Wik's contributions are written in
blue, Immy's are in
yellow, and mine are in
purple.
Now we can confidently continue with our treatment. Our plan for the opening two minutes entails the killer, whose face is never revealed, preparing for the first murder. It cross cuts between this, and the act being carried out through a series of mysterious close-ups and match-on-action that conceal the faces of both the killer and the victim.
In terms of audio, we are considering having the non-diegetic music of Camille Saint-Saƫns'
Danse Macabre (copyright free due to its 19th century origins!) playing over the action after the killer equips his headphones. Before this, however, we will have the film in relative silence, with the audience only hearing diegetic sounds, such as footsteps, heavy breathing, and sizzling chemicals.
For the titles, we are going to overlay them over the action on screen in order to prevent taking away time from the action itself. As for the name of the film, we wanted to integrate it into the environment, and so we are planning on creating a neon sign (if we can get our hands on one) that reads 'Toxic'; the killer will walk past the sign to keep the shot relevant to the narrative of the opening.